I was walking through the rain…
Carrying a heavy heart full of pain…
I didn’t know that I was crying…
I didn’t know that my eyes were wet…
I saw many friends of mine…
But no one could see me crying…
I guess my tears were so small…
To cheat my friend's eyes...
May be I am worrying too much…
May be I’ve gone emotionally mad…
May be my nerves are dying…
Or may be it’s me who is dying….
How long I can hold it? I am not sure,
But as long as I hold it,
I will hold it with a smile…
I will hold it with a smile…
I wish if no one could see me crying…
Carrying a heavy heart full of pain…
I didn’t know that I was crying…
I didn’t know that my eyes were wet…
I saw many friends of mine…
But no one could see me crying…
I guess my tears were so small…
To cheat my friend's eyes...
May be I am worrying too much…
May be I’ve gone emotionally mad…
May be my nerves are dying…
Or may be it’s me who is dying….
How long I can hold it? I am not sure,
But as long as I hold it,
I will hold it with a smile…
I will hold it with a smile…
I wish if no one could see me crying…
I wish if no one could see me dying...
10 comments:
This is the last warning for you!!!
Tears and smiles ,happiness and sorrow are just like the two sides of a coin or just like the keys of a piano white keys and black keys .But when they are played together it produces sweet music . Be optimistic jithu .....
Thankam
This reminded me of old saying by the gr8 comedian- Charlie Chaplin - "When u r crying, either start cutting an onion or walk in the rain; no one can see ur tears..."
Keep writing G2... ;-)
Hi hi hi...
"I wish if no one could see me crying…
I wish if no one could see me dying..."
If you wished so, then u shudnt have written this... :P
I wish you wudn't have written this... :D
Awesome...Theres a great improvement in this poem, when compared to the rest. Good one!!!
By the way, what is it that you worrying so much about?? Chill, buddy...Life holds more interesting things that you havent yet discovered....;)...Anyways good poem, good try..
Nice poem
eda chakkare.. nee karayalle pls.. ninakku njanille.. muthe.. ummaaa :)
hmm..ingane karanju kulamakkalle chettayi....shhooooooooooo..enikku vayya......
mm...pottettoo..saramilla...ellam sheriyavumenne..
trust me dear....
love ....
-me-
Nice poem dear....Keep writing...but u dont hv to cry...u can share your sorrow with me anytime....
I second Terrence!!
Orrennam nallathaanennu paranjappol, nee thalyil kayarunno? ;-)
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