I don't know how did I write this poem... but I just wrote... Don't know whether it holds any meaning.. but still posting.. After all its my first poem in my life.. :). here it goes - The Monday moon...
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Monday moon makes me cry...
Oneday I am gonna make him dry...
Sunday the day, let me give a try!
I wonder, why do I cry at this monday moon...
Don't know whats wrong with this monday moon,
But now, I really feel tired of this Monday Moon...
Is it just a spot or really a moon?
I really don't know whats so special,
But its a wonder moon to me!
Though it makes me cry very soon,
I don't think its a guilty goon..
Because I still love my monday Moon!
18 comments:
evanokke aara shambalam kodukunne...officil irrunond katha ezhuth, kavitha ezhuth...
you got a childish boon...!!!
Hey mate...
Sounds rhyming however not so continuous. It could have sounded better if there was more continuity. Do work on the continuity and your flow of thoughts.
I am sure u can write better poems.
ho daivame.. ini enthokke kaanenam..
- Sandeep
Kashtam... Vendayirunnu... Kalavasana teere tottuterippichittilla... If it goes like this blogger.com puttumallooo... :P
Vannu vannu Ethu pithakkaranum Kavitha ezhuthaamennaayi..
Vaayilthoonnunnathellam vaari valichezhuthiyaal kavithayaavilla..
Athinokkey oru sense undavanam,sensitivity undaavanam .TTOOO
Meylaal ippanikku muthiraruthuuu..
ahem ahem..Your critics are my encouragement. :D.. I wnt gie up.. Never give up...I will rock u all one day!! ahem ahem!! Just remeber that!!!
Hello everyone!!!
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da kalla Jithu... Ente photo........
Hey Lion,
It's great to know that you can try out this skill too. Prose is one; poetry is another. Man! you will rock - I trust that insight... a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.. Way to go.. Keep on shooting.. Good Day, Bro.
Wat shud I say...Shud I encourage this...eyyy....athu venda...Shud I discourage him...eyy....athum venda...vere pani onnum illallo....Pinne enthu cheyyum..??
ee Monday Moon ennathu kondu enthaanu udheshichathu ennu maathram manasilaayillaa....
hmm hmm hmmm
Eeshwaraaa!!!! Ithum kavithayo? Ethra iduthi nee veruthe avideyum ivideyum veezhthi kalayunnu? Orrennam ivante thalayil? Please...
Jithu .. ithu poem aanennu ezhuthiyathu nannaayi!!!
phuuu poem anu polum poem ..........
You wrote Stories , I kept silent .
You started poems .... Now you made me to comment . Nirthikkode ?
Ur Old friend .
Whats your thought on Saturday moon ??
I think you have got “Monday morning syndrome”…ravile eneettu official povan madi enna Malayalam paribhasha…-:) athavum ee karachilinte pinnil…anyways…keep writing….relaxationu pattiya paniya thankalude blog vayikkunnathu….ha ha…
Ithu poem anu ennu paranjathu nannayi..:p
Anyways first time alle..athu kondu kshemichirikkunnu...
-Joona
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